The Unbundled Witch, Miranda Linn Miranda Linn is a highly skilled and respected witch known for her practice of unbundling. Unbundling is a unique and powerful form of magic that involves unraveling and analyzing complex spells or enchantments in order to modify or improve them. Born into a family of witches, Miranda displayed an extraordinary affinity for magic from a young age. Her mother, also a skilled witch, recognized Miranda's talents and began training her in the ways of spellcasting. As Miranda grew older, she became more interested in the inner workings of magic and sought to understand how spells could be further refined. It was during her studies at the prestigious Academy of Magic that Miranda discovered her passion for unbundling.
I was excited to start book 2, the conclusion of the duology. Not just because of the quality of book 1 but also because of the cliffhanger ending . However, I felt really blindsided to find out that book 2 is a dual POV, not between Raven and the king but between Raven and Kirsi (I don’t believe this is a spoiler, as it’s in the table of contents, but happy to tag). This has totally thrown me off— it’s super jarring to go from different first person POVs, and it made me feel disconnected from the main character I had spent the entire first book with. I found myself skimming entire chapters, trying to get to the next plot point. As a result, the story, which is supposed to be the climax and ending of the duology, feels kind of shallow and rushed. I’m so bummed out because I gobbled up book 1. I love the idea of duologies, but I honestly think this would have made a great trilogy (allowing for some of the reveals and political intrigue to develop more organically), and would have benefited from either sticking to the same narrator (Raven) or being third person instead.
This has totally thrown me off it s super jarring to go from different first person POVs, and it made me feel disconnected from the main character I had spent the entire first book with. However, I felt really blindsided to find out that book 2 is a dual POV, not between Raven and the king but between Raven and Kirsi I don t believe this is a spoiler, as it s in the table of contents, but happy to tag.
It was during her studies at the prestigious Academy of Magic that Miranda discovered her passion for unbundling. She realized that by dissecting spells and enchantments, she could comprehend their intricate components and identify areas for enhancement. This revelation led her to embark on a journey of mastering the art of unbundling.
Simultaneous gush and rant: The Unmarked Witch/The Unbound Witch
Ok so I started this duology by Miranda Lyn a few days ago and am feeling very conflicted. I really loved the first book, even though I usually don’t vibe with first person POV, and despite some messy areas of character development— it reminded me of ACOTAR and ACOMAF actually, just on a smaller scale. The book had me engaged, interested in the world, simping over the king, etc.
I was excited to start book 2, the conclusion of the duology. Not just because of the quality of book 1 but also because of the cliffhanger ending . However, I felt really blindsided to find out that book 2 is a dual POV, not between Raven and the king but between Raven and Kirsi (I don’t believe this is a spoiler, as it’s in the table of contents, but happy to tag). This has totally thrown me off— it’s super jarring to go from different first person POVs, and it made me feel disconnected from the main character I had spent the entire first book with. I found myself skimming entire chapters, trying to get to the next plot point. As a result, the story, which is supposed to be the climax and ending of the duology, feels kind of shallow and rushed. I’m so bummed out because I gobbled up book 1. I love the idea of duologies, but I honestly think this would have made a great trilogy (allowing for some of the reveals and political intrigue to develop more organically), and would have benefited from either sticking to the same narrator (Raven) or being third person instead.
Has anyone else read this book? Should I keep going? Does the dual POV have a point?
These are both on KU btw.
Has anyone else read this book? Should I keep going? Does the dual POV have a point?
Miranda's unbundling process involves carefully examining the elements that make up a spell or enchantment. She dissects each component, exploring its origins, purpose, and potential. By doing so, she gains a deeper understanding of the magic at work and can make adjustments or modifications to improve its effectiveness. Her skills quickly gained recognition within the magical community, and she started receiving requests from fellow witches seeking her assistance in optimizing their spells. Miranda's unbundling expertise became highly sought after, and she was soon known as "The Unbundled Witch." What sets Miranda apart from other practitioners of magic is her ability to enhance spells without altering their core essence. Rather than completely rewriting a spell, she focuses on refining its existing structure, making it more efficient and powerful. This approach allows for a seamless integration of her improvements into the original magic, resulting in its seamless and harmonious functioning. Miranda's work has had a significant impact on the magical community. Her contributions have not only improved existing spells but have also inspired new and innovative spellcasting techniques. Many young witches now aspire to become skilled unbundlers like Miranda. In addition to her unbundling practice, Miranda also takes the time to mentor young witches and share her knowledge. Her dedication to education and her commitment to preserving the integrity of magic have made her a highly respected figure in the magical community. The unbundled witch, Miranda Linn, continues to push the boundaries of magic and inspire others with her unique approach. Through her distinct understanding of spells and enchantments, she has redefined the possibilities of magic and left an indelible mark on the world of witchcraft..
Reviews for "Mirandsa Lnn: The Unbund Witch Who is Changing the Narrative"
1. Emily - 2 stars - I found "The Unbound Witch Miranda Lynn" to be quite disappointing. The writing was disjointed and lacked depth, making it difficult for me to connect with the characters. Additionally, the plot felt cliché and predictable, leaving little room for surprise or excitement. Overall, I found the book to be underwhelming and would not recommend it to others.
2. John - 1 star - I can honestly say that "The Unbound Witch Miranda Lynn" was one of the worst books I've read in a long time. The story was incredibly slow-moving, and the characters were one-dimensional and unrelatable. The author's writing style felt forced, and I struggled to maintain interest throughout the entire book. I was looking forward to a gripping and exciting witch-themed novel, but unfortunately, this book fell far short of my expectations.
3. Sarah - 2 stars - I was highly disappointed with "The Unbound Witch Miranda Lynn". The plot was poorly developed, with many loose ends left untied. The dialogue felt contrived and lacked authenticity, making it difficult to immerse myself in the story. The pacing was inconsistent, which added to my overall frustration with the book. I was hoping for an engaging and well-crafted witch story, but unfortunately, this novel did not deliver.
4. David - 2.5 stars - I wanted to like "The Unbound Witch Miranda Lynn", but ultimately, I found it to be a mediocre read. The characters lacked depth and growth, which made it challenging to form any emotional connection with them. The world-building felt poorly executed, leaving many questions unanswered and hindering my ability to fully immerse myself in the story. While the concept was intriguing, the execution fell flat for me, and I was left feeling somewhat let down by this book.
5. Emma - 1 star - I regret picking up "The Unbound Witch Miranda Lynn". The writing style was not to my liking, with excessive use of clichéd phrases and lackluster descriptions. The pacing was sluggish, and the plot felt predictable and unoriginal. I found it difficult to engage with the story or care about the fate of the characters. Overall, this book was a disappointment and not one that I would recommend to fans of the genre.